The voice of the wind 

Whispering words

As I watch the world go by

A flash of color, a twirl of light

Are all within my sight


Fire flickers forcefully

Telling me the truth 

How I really feel 

Most of the time

 I think


Air blows by next

The cold side makes me afraid

And the hot side makes me happy 

Which is right, though

I don’t know


Earth is last 

Telling me to follow my heart

Not what my head says

The bubbley laugh within 

The colorful swirl of my soul

Tells me all I need to know

About myself


What is my center 

I ask myself

And now I know


Of my friends

And my classmates

My family

Of the world around me

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  • Thank you all so much! I wrote this a long time ago, and it is exactly how I feel!
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